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Westboro (please read description 1st)

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Intro:
This Isn't real,
Your Beliefs are false,
You have all been damned
You'll all just be fuel to the fires of hell

Verse:
Do you believe in god?
That he is your Sheppard
that you are his sheep?
Do you believe he is a merciful god?
That he loves you with all his heart
That you are among the ones he doesn't hate?
Well let me tell you something
Let me spread the truth

Your beliefs are all false.
You have preached corrupt sermons.
Your ways aren't true.
You have made false prophecies.

Don't you fucking realize,
You have damned yourself?
That If your god is the way you've preached,
then you would be among the first he'd hate?!

Chorus:
Now this is your end!
Choke of your own fucking lies!!
I've meant all that I've said before!
So you can get on your own knees
You can pray all you want!
But the truth won't change!
YOUR GOD WILL STILL FUCKING HATE YOU!

So Choke of your own fucking lies!!
Choke on your own vermin spit!!!
I've meant all that I've said before!
You can get on your own knees
You can pray all you want!
But the truth will never change!
YOUR GOD STILL FUCKING HATES YOU!!!
WARNING!! PLEASE READ THIS FIRST!!!!!!!!!!!!!

this is a song i wrote, it is about hate specificaly its a hate song about the Westboro Baptist church.
I strongly dislike the westboro baptist church and how they operate, i recently seen some members protesting a fallen veterans funeral which started to make my blood boil which is what drove me to write this

this song is being made into a deathcore song by my band, there is no particular rhyming pattern.

I am also looking for any critiques, anyways that people may think i can improve this writing or past writings and even future writings
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EclecticQuill's avatar
I don't know the church, nor the incident you refer to, however I've seen many examples, from many faiths, of intolerance and contradictory action.
I'm not religious, but I respect those that are, but I also despise those that use religion as a justification for wrong action.

These are some good lyrics, poignant and true. :nod: